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 Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 9:00 pm Post subject: Mass Rivalty (Adapted for unfinished Psypoke version) |
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I think a few of you on Psypoke such as Tmaster and Elemental trainer may remember this fanfic I made that didn't get ver far, but I've decided to revive and finish it... But only on Hyperpokes! I'll actually finish this for once *Hopefully*, so prepare to read.
Chapter One
You’re not always better than somebody at something, this is the case I’m going through. My brother is better than me in almost every way, he is smarter, he looks better, he is more powerful, he is more attractive, he is highly respected and is the family favorite. But the one thing I have that he doesn’t, is a heart. My brother would let a person die if he had too. But I’m not like that, I would help, I can’t bear to see people in pain and suffering. I can’t do anything but help, help them survive, give them a home and some love. And that set the tragedy in motion…..
“Are you going to sit their all day thinking? Get off the couch and help me for once!”
“Fine, I’m coming!” I got off the couch and left my little house.
“What did you need me to do, Ryan?” I was still having trouble waking up.
“Well, I was planning to go get some food for us, but Hitly, the friendly Hitmonchan form down the old dirt path has been hurt. While I get the food, could you go to her and see what’s wrong?” Asked my brother Ryan, the shiny Lucario.
When will he ever learn to help?
“Fine, I’ll go see what’s wrong." I responded.
“Thanks, Blace!” With that I headed off to Hitly’s house.
There was a light breeze, it helped calm me.
“What could have happened to Hitly? And why did Ryan seem so eager to get away from me? I wonder….” Blace saw swarms of Tailow playing tag, Hoppip playing hide-and-go-seek.
“How could something happen on such a peaceful day? Hitly never did anything wrong…. Whoa! I’m already here!” I looked at Hitly’s house and saw broken windows, a destroyed door. And several pokemon were staring at the house in fear. They were chattering about what might have happened.
“Maybe she was hit on the head by a kitchen appliance?” Wondered a Sunflora.
“I doubt it, Hitly is one of the most careful pokemon here in Plaxy!” Responded the wise Alakazam.
“Yeah, you’re probably right maybe she was….” Sunflora paused.
“Murdered?” I continued.
“Yeah, maybe. I’m to scared to think of it, thought.”
“Then I’ll find out!” It was one of the few times I felt brave.
“Okay, you do that then….” Sunflora was shivering.
I stepped onto the front porch, a feeling of dread and sorrow swept over me.
“What could have happened?” I opened the door and saw smashed windows, broken doors, tables smashed in two…
As I stepped into the living room a found a horrifying sight; Ms. Hitly was lying on the floor, unconscious.
“What happened?” I rushed up to her.
“Are you all right?” To my surprise she wasn’t dead, yet.
“Ugh, I was just sitting here when all of a sudden I see I huge blur of gold and a little bit of blue. It got closer, and closer, but than my vision went blank and I awake to find myself lying here.” She described.
“What? Gold? Blue? Could it be my brother, Ryan? It couldn’t… but I don’t know anybody else who looks like that.”
“Yes. I’m afraid it looked very much like Ryan, though I’m not sure. But this is for you to find out, for I do not have much longer to live.” She began looking weaker and limper every second.
“No! I want you to live!” I was shocked.
“I can’t help it….. I can’t live any lo….” She was cut off, she fell to the floor; dead.
“NO!” I couldn’t hold back my tears, I was crying badly.
I picked up the dead Hitmonchan and left the house. Everybody starred at me in horror and disbelief as Hitly lay in my arms.
“How could this happen?” The pokemon, including Alakazam were more worried than they had ever been.
“Hitly was such a good person, how could anybody dare kill her?” Sunflora’s eyes were storming with tears.
“I don’t know… Hitly did so much for us, but we never got to repay her. Whoever did this deserves to die!” Zang, the aggressive Zangoose had just noticed the torn-up house and walked into the yard.
“Does anybody have any idea who did this?” Zang was lokking at everybody, somehow trying to find the culprit.
“Well,” I began.
“When I found her she was alive and…”
“So it was you!” Everybody stared at me.
“No, let me finish! When I found her she was still alive, she told me that she was just minding her own business when all of a sudden she sees a blur of gold and blue, exactly what Ryan looks like! The next second she was out cold and awakens to see me next to her. And earlier today Ryan seemed eager to stay away from people!” I exclaimed.
“You-you mean Ryan killed Hitly?” Sunflora was trembling.
“Yes, I know he seemed to be kind to us. But what I wonder is what drove him to do such a thing!” I continued. Torkoal stepped up.
“Then we need a plan! But….” Torkoal dropped his head.
“… Last I saw him was earlier today, he apparently left town!” He continued.
“WHAT?!” Everybody fell back.
“Yes, quite a problem indeed.” Alakazam pointed out.
“But wait, if he did it once, he might come back tonight! We’ll have to be on gaurd, because he could come for any of you tonight!”
“You mean, he could even kill me? A Sunflora that doesn’t do much at all?” Sunflora stammered.
“I’m afraid to say this, but what you said is true. I could even die tonight.” Alakazam looked down.
“I’m afraid that’s all we know for now. Go home, protect yourself and all of your children.” Everybody scattered, but he could still here the gossip of who he’ll strike. I fell to the ground.
I have to avenge Hitly, but how? I have no idea how I’ll find Ryan, but even is I do, his strength over me will most likely cause my death… I couldn’t help but feel pain and sorrow, but I managed to bring the body to a funeral home.
Good-bye Hitly, how could anybody do such pain to us? I dropped off her body and went home, silent.
“I guess what happens happened, but I can’t help but feel guilty….” I took some Wiki berries and sat down.
“I feel that this was all my fault, but how?” I took a bite out off the the rather dry Wikis.
That night, when I went to bed a horrifying thought came to my mind.
What if he’s coming for me next? Lucarios are supposed to be gentil like me; how could he be so ruthless? He should be happy he was born shiny and powerful, he should respect that and not want more. I became drowsy and sleep overtook me.
“Must, stay awake, must, stay, awa…. ZZZZ” I fell asleep.
“Hey, ready to see what pain means?” It was a familiar voice, Ryan!
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Looks better, noticed a few small grammar and spelling mistakes.
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Chapter 2
“What the? Ryan?!” I scrambled out of my straw bed.
“Yes, it is me! But that does not really mater, for you won’t be thinking much longer!” Ryan charged at me at full while pointing the spike on his hand at me.
“What are you doing?!” I yelled while dodging his swift strike.
“Why are you doing this?” My temper was rising faster then a mad Tauros.
“The answer is simple, Blace!” He fired in aura sphere that struck me in the leg.
“Then tell me!” The blow was stinging while the aura twirled around me.
“Fine, since you’re so curious!” A smirk appeared on Ryan’s face.
“You see, ever since I was born every loved me and have been nice to me, where’s the fun in that? So I’ve been planning to kill them all ever since I became smart enough to know what death was! And thank Arceus that I was born like this!” His shiny skin sparkled; lighting up the room.
“What? What kind of reason is that?!” Rage flowed through my heartbroken body.
“Wouldn’t you like to know!” Pulses sounding like the roar of dragons erupted from him.
“What are you doing? If you had a heart you would stop now! You reckless…” The screams of the dragon pulse roared in my ears.
“Little...” The noise over took me and I collapsed onto the floor.
As my vision went blank my heartless brother’s voice echoed through the air.
“A heart is something I lost long, long ago Blace, and something that has no meaning and worth to me.” I wiped out completely as Ryan’s footsteps echoed through the building.
“Blace! Blace! BLACE!” A voice awoke me.
“Huh? Who is that?” I jolted up looking around me, I was in a hospital.
“He’s alive!” I saw Alakazam, Sunflora and Milotic around me.
“We thought you were dead!” Sunflora said with relief. Alakazam perked up.
“What actually happened to you?” Alakazam was staring at me with a concerned gaze.
“Well, you know how we thought Ryan would attack somebody else last night?” I already knew what his response would be.
“And he came for you?” I let out a sigh.
“Yes, but I he must have thought I was dead and left early.”
“Well that’s certainly good news! But if he did indeed come back, I’m near sure he’ll come back again.” Alakazam lost himself in a cloud of thought.
“If he does…” Everybody stared at the wise pokemon. Finally Sunflora spoke.
“Are you feeling all right, Alakazam?” Alakazam flinched.
“Who what where? Oh sorry, I was trying to predict who Ryan would attempt to kill next.” Alakazam regained his focus.
“What did you see?”
“Well, before Sunflora interrupted me,”
“Heh heh… oops.” Sunflora had a strange look on her face.
“Let me continue! I saw leaves and trees everywhere, the air was peaceful, but the tang of… sap filled the air.”
“Sap, what’s so bad about that?” Milotic asked.
“It wasn’t sap you’d find a lot, it was fresh. And that means it is a grass pokemon he is attacking, since they do not have blood. But I’m pretty sure plants like you, Sunflora don’t have sap, so it must be…” Alakazam bowed his head.
“… Shiftry.”
“Yes, that makes sense, he’s the only tree pokemon here besides Sudowoodo, but Sudowoodo is a rock, which don’t have leaves.” Blace raised his bruised head.
“Well, then we have to go help him tonight!” Blace stammered with a concerned look on his face.
“No, you still need to rest from being attacked by Ryan yesterday, I will go, go home and rest up a bit.” Blace stared at the six pairs of eyes.
“Sigh, fine.” I picked myself up and headed home, disappointed.
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